Comfort During Pain

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Way too many hours because I made a complete rendered gray scale, which was a little unnecessary.
"This is supposed to be after mae is (spoilers)           shot at by the cult and back from the hospital. Thought it would be a nice change of story if instead of her crawling around town to find her friends some of them actually come and give her company instead. (though this would be a dangerous move for the friends since they know the cult members are after them.)"
Please tell me what you think, I'm all for improvement.
Also, depending on the color vibrancy of your screen, the back of the room maybe too dark to see. On my own and others screens you can see objects such as a guitar, amp...